Although our work had some good points in it for instance our opeing minute and ten seconds is very good we still have a long way to go. After speaking to Mr Michey we decided with his help what we need to change to make a great thriller opening. We decided that:
We need to record Maizy, our actress sining the full version of the twinkle twinkle song so that we can play it over our titles at the start and build a bit more suspense.
Our transitions between places need to be slowed down to give a clear indication that the location has chnaged.
Close up shots of Maizies character need to be shown more frequently so that the audience can interact with her and her emotions a lot more.
When Maizy looks around in the woods we should do some point of view shots showing what Maizy can see.
Our diagetic sound needs to take a bigger role in the second minute of the film in the woods. We need to consider getting rid of some of the music or blening the two together to keep to the verisimilitude of a scene in the woods.
Also we are considering changing a film quite dramticly. We are considering cutting out the barn and alley scenes and instead make our in the house scenes longer and cut at some point in the woods.
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